Too long since I posted....

Crimsonandwhite · Jun 1, 2009

Been working hard trying to get better. As always hit me up with critques

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6. Local band I worked with....Attollent

7. Abby - lead singer

musicaleCA · Jun 1, 2009

I like the last one the most. The style of the photo complements her clothing, and the contrasting black/white you get in there. I feel the arm could be a tad brighter, and a little softening on the shadow on her elbow might help; make her look a little less chubby (I tried to find a more eloquent/politically-correct way to say that, really I did).

#6 Looks like it was on-camera flash only, and I think given the angle of the shot, it would have really benefited from getting that flash higher, perhaps even two with diffusers of some sort high left and right (could use a little more light on the face of the guy furthest back). The guy in front is just way too bright; he probably should have worn black too (unless you *want* him to stick out for some reason, but I've always had the impression that with bands, people associate with the lead singer most, because...well, people aren't musically-inclined frankly and probably have an easier time understanding the lyrics).