too much?

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  1. tkme4ard

    tkme4ard TPF Noob!

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    cc please

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    tkme4ard TPF Noob!

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    Well, I find it too much, personally. Mostly so in the second photo shown here, her lashes look like she applied too much mascara which stuck them all together, and something tells me that she did NOT do that FOR SURE before you had your photo shoot.

    In the first, the whites in her eyes are almost blue ... so I feel that there you went past what is "right" (to my mind), too.
     
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    i think they are both great.

    my fave out of the two is the second one.

    i love close ups like this:D
     
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    tkme4ard TPF Noob!

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    ok LaFoto I thought they same thing. Off to play again!
     
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    they are way over sharpened. you can see the weird colors around her eyelashes. they actual iris itself looks nice, but try to do a neater job.
     
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    I love that babies' expressions! How cute and you got the focus right on! I would just try ot make the lashes less sharpened. Good job!
     
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    Just sharpen the Iris, but nice shots and expressions.
     
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    I agree with heip. If you just sharpen the irises, but leave the eyelashes alone, and then make sure the whites are smooth and clean, I think you will be golden.
     
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    ok lets try these :) I just did the color part of her eyes and not nearly as sharp as before.

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    Better? or should I jump the number back to wear I had it? but just the color part of her eye?
     
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    Very beautiful. I really like the second set of edits.
     
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    :thumbup: good deal!
     

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