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  1. DadeCountyAnthony

    DadeCountyAnthony TPF Noob!

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    Hi everyone,

    I took this picture and cropped it to what you see. I would like C&C on the crop work and ideas if it needs improvement.

    Anthony
     
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    I don't know if I really like the subject (but you did and that's what matters). It seems kind of dull.

    Maybe a little more contrast would help. The torch and flame blend into the background a little too much for my liking.

    As for the crop, it may be hard to critique without viewing the original. But, I think the positioning of the torch within it is good.
     
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    Thanks for your c&c Kormechea.
     
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    the backround is similar to the subject in tone and texture and doesnt make the subject pop out. a different backround might make it more interesting
     

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