Toshiki

[jeytee]

My friend from Japan on an exchange program. Any CC welcome! Thanks !
The picture with the coat didn't turn out very well, but I do like the direction that it was headed so I included it and thoughts on how to fix it up would be appreciated.
(Please ignore the random highlight in the 2nd picture, I'll fix it up in PP)

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[Braineack]

I personally like #4 the best. just wish the light was higher.

 

[DanOstergren]

I agree that the light could be at a higher angle to sculpt the features just a bit more.