TPF Noob, critique please?

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  1. dyedm6trix

    dyedm6trix TPF Noob!

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    This a few shots from the past few years. This summer I got a job taking pictures for a book, and I need some tips, so be harsh. Any advice is great, thanks!

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    Love the last ones....specially the one with the love wrighting in branches.
     
  3. dyedm6trix

    dyedm6trix TPF Noob!

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    thanks a lot =]
     
  4. TJ K

    TJ K No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Someone likes paintball? haha
    1 isn't too bad composition is fine nothing is dead center which is good and a regular beginner mistake so good job!
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    Doug Solis TPF Noob!

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    the third photo has perfect exposure and a nicely framed composition using the trees. your last photo has exposure problems, looks like a lot of blown highlights.
    your first photo is fine but I almost feel a different setup taking the sun out of the composition would be better especially if you could incorporate some of the colorful clouds. Its tough even for someone looking at a photo in which the sun is so bright.
    Not bad overall though!
     
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    Nocojoe TPF Noob!

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    I like the first one the best. I like the colors and the easy-going feel the photo gives off.
     
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    First one is the best. The rest are just a little too... ordinary, y'know?
     

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