Trail.

[derekxcole]

These were taken this fall and it was my first time behind a good camera, I really like these but I have had no one to critique them so do it hard and tell me what I could of done to make these better. Just so you know I did not use a flash because I really liked the foggy eerie look of the trail.

 

[derekxcole]

Could anyone critique these?

 

[andycarnall]

I like the first one - the composition and tone are nice and she's got a very enigmatic expression, sort of siren like (can't work out if she's cute and nice or cute and dangerous!!)

I think the second one sufferes because she's dead centre - it would look better if she was too the right a bit, so the picture drew you in to look at her and then to look for what she's looking at. The sky looks a bit blow out as well, maybe turn the exposure down 1/2 a stop or work on in in Photoshop a bit.