Train Bridge(much less pictures)

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  1. Uselessdreamer1

    Uselessdreamer1 TPF Noob!

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    sorry about the crazy last topic. i should havew went through first. here are my favorites tell me what u think? I wanna make them the best possible.
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  2. JonMikal

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    useless, try to focus on one image at a time in the critique section. sometimes it gets rather lengthy when ppl have to comment on more than one.

    i really like these; have i seen them recemtly somewhere else? i like the fence composition but would have liked a bit more focus at the end. good pattern on #2, maybe a .5 - 1 degree tilt clockwise.

    keep 'em coming! (one at a time of course) :wink:
     
  3. Mo

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    Yeah, post only one next time. I don't mean that in a harsh way, though. :)

    I like the first two but think that the last is too bright in the corner. I like the second one most.
     

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