Transamerica Building

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  1. themonko

    themonko TPF Noob!

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    Can't decide if I like this picture or not. Bring on the critique...

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  2. JackTheTripper

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    I like the second one better. The length sets off the building more where as in the first the mobile(?) is the center of focus.

    What is that anyway? Where's it taken? I'll be in north beach on Saturday spending the night.

    **EDIT**

    P.S. I love the colors.
     
  3. themonko

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    do you know where Embarcadero Center is? There is a **Chevy's** at Embarcadero Building One (i think) and outside there is this weird looking (i don't even know what to call it) thing. I never cared much for it...but was walking around it and saw this angle and really liked it.

    Tried to capture it and will go back to improve if I get some feedback.

    Thanks for the comment.
     
  4. aggiezach

    aggiezach Yup...

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    I'd say I like the second one the best, but that being said it is a little too busy for my likeing. Too many things that my eye wants to focus on.


    Zach :D
     
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    I like the second one more..... they both look very abstract... haha
     
  6. JackTheTripper

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    Ya ya. OK. I know where that is. I only ever see it when I'm in NB, Broadway area, not downtown. It doesn't stick out as much with all the other buildings around.
     
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    busy, no "anchor" to grab the eye, and form a referance.just me though, and i dont know much.
     
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    I love these shots!!! They seem well thought out and very "2010"

    I am trying to think of a crit... Maybe the yellow cast is a bit heavy?
     

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