okay....after I collected all the comments, here is a summary...
I haven't paid attention to the little details like spelling, the size of font, framing and the arrangement of the photos etc. Originally, I picked 20 pictures to publish, but was decreased to 15 subsequently. The composition looked too similar, boring and didn't have the gradation. This set of photos also didn't give the oldish mood that I am intending to do. Any suggestion to improve....?
"Bandwidth exceeded" ... not one photo to be seen. Sorry.
But best not present us with 15 photos if you want them commented on or even more throughly critiqued. Choose up to 5 (at the most), better only 1, or 3. No more.