Tree buds about to bloom...C&C Please!

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  1. JNA Photo

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    Did some outdoor shooting today, and got a picture of some tree flowers close to blooming. Let me know what you think!

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    it seems to have a little camera shake.......
     
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    ^Yeah, there is a little shake to the focus. It does have some nice bokeh. I'd maybe recommend downsizing your signature a bit though, you don't want it stealing attention from your photo.
     
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    focus on the bud to the right?
     
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    Thanks everyone for your comments. The bit of motion blur was caused by the branch moving in the wind. It was pretty windy here yesterday.

    I agree about the watermark, I will be sure to keep that smaller in size.

    Also, yes the bud on the right was the focus point, but my DOF didn't come out as deep as I would have liked to keep that other bud in focus as well.
     
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    Then you really missed the focus, the one on the left is clearly sharper, bit of a typo there?

    Other than the little motion blur (didnt notice it untill I read someone sed it has then looked back) its very good.
     
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    Yes, I meant to say that the bud on the left was the focus point. If my DOF was set properly, I think the other bud would have been sharper. Thanks for you comments!
     

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