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  1. milesy

    milesy TPF Noob!

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    hi all
    i would love to hear thoughts on these two - yes they have been photoshoped but please tell me what you like / dislike about them


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  2. BuS_RiDeR

    BuS_RiDeR No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    No pics.. Broken links only... sorry.
     
  3. milesy

    milesy TPF Noob!

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    really.......they seem to work when i look at them - linked from Flickr??

    can anyone else see them / not see them?
     
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    I see them!

    1) use fill light for the dark spot on hair
    2) not bad..maybe crop off the top a bit and see how that looks.
     
  5. BuS_RiDeR

    BuS_RiDeR No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I can see them now... Musta just been a glitch. :)

    Nice... Maybe just a hair over-exposed? Although it might just be me...
     
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    did you totally cut her out of another picture and put the backgrounds on?
     
  7. milesy

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    yep pretty much - do you think it looks ok - or abit too much?
     
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    I am not sure about the first picture with the Wood OSB background. It seems as if the picture is not grounded and the girl is just floating. The second one is not a bad picture but I am not crazy about the backdrop, but I do not like purple.
     
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    do you mean by not grounded that she seems to be too infront of the backdrop??
     
  10. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    In the first, her hair immediately gives away that she was cut from out of another (darker) background and pasted in front of this new one. It is way too obvious (still).

    The second is better in that respect, but then I myself am not too fond of purple backgrounds together with skin colours, either.
     
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    I agree with LaPhoto.

    With the first one, the lighting is obviously different between background and subject. The way the shadows fall is all wrong.
     
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    Why is she photoshopped into a new background?
     

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