Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by bishopsmead, Mar 10, 2005.
hmm I'd love the shot if the lower part of the bike was a bit visible... I see only dark place alll around and the silhouette of the guy on the bike. But the sky is amazing
Looks good on the laptop - am I going to have to lighten it??
Does anyone else find it dark?
i would try to lighten it slightly, but then if you say it looks good on your laptop,i've tried to change the angle of my monitor,and i must say it does appear better, i think it has room for improvement,looks a scary trick, not something i would attempt..
yeah its a bit dark. If you lighten it dont lighten the bike rider though. He is a great shilouhete against the sky.
I would lighten the midtones. It is awesome how it looks like he is perched over the edge of the ocean..
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