Tried some more PP

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  1. chaos4fun

    chaos4fun TPF Noob!

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    Took another set this weekend and did some more pp to them. Just wanted to see what people thought about them.


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  2. ypperin

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    All except the last one seem either really soft, out of focus or the victim of camera shake :/

    The last one would be better if both she and he were in focus but as it is it seems only she is in focus.

    Cute little guy though :)
     
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    I tried to give them a softer or more dream like feel which is probably what is making them seem out of focus. I'm guessing that I just over did them in pp a bit.
     
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    Yeah, not a big fan of the soft focus because it really does make it look like you missed the focus.

    I think #3 is a cute shot..
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Your idea of "making them more dreamlike" comes through most in the third, but unfortunately they all four look like they went downright wrong, technically. Missed focus, poor composition - the kind of family photo you do find in everyone's albums, and those who the photos belong to love them, and are totally entitled to love them, but neutral outsiders (like ourselves) don't see any step towards "more artistic" in them. Sorry.
     

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