try this again! please comment

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  1. papatooth

    papatooth TPF Noob!

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    The only one that really grabs my attention is the last one. The extremely small DOF in the first one makes my eyes want to go crossed. The foreground could use more focus. The horse just doesn't pop. I'm still a noob so I can't even say why. The third one could be good. I think I would have gone a little wider. IMO clouds always need wider lenses. I don't care if you have a fisheye, it could go wider.
     
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    First one is kinda neat- pleasant texture and color.

    The last one is quite cool. I think I might have been a little less aggressive on the crop, but I really enjoy the color of the wood with the odd color of the water. I could say cheesy things like "the sense of motion is really cool" and all kinds of stuff like that, but really I just find it to be a visually pleasing shot.
     

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