Trying new stuff, C&C...

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by .Cipher, Aug 5, 2008.

  1. .Cipher

    .Cipher TPF Noob!

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    Just some quick playing around yesterday
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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    1. Good work, but a touch too bright highlights. Consider a diffuser.

    2, 3. The skylight rather detracts from the image. I'd suggest reshooting from a different angle to eliminate that blown area and cropping to level the shelf and eliminate most of it.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary

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