trying to improve

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  1. nicdutcher

    nicdutcher TPF Noob!

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    Here are some shots I took this weekend. Any advice appreciated.
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  2. Fedaykin

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    Subjects are out of focus in the first two shots. Composition is good. I kinda want to see the flower field on the first one too. You should have shot one with the whole field in focus.(if you did please show it :)

    On the last one the sky looks too bright and bland, maybe try underexposing one stop and try getting a better White balance for the sky so you can get a deeper blue. Another thing is I would have shot closer to the truck, the grass in the foreground is unnecessary.

    I know I sound critical, but they're actually good shots otherwise, keep it up ;)
     
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    I really like 'em, especially 2 and 3:)
     

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