TubularCongruence

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  1. KmH

    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    Wonderful, almost organic.
     
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    I like it. :thumbup:

    This is the kind of stuff that I would probably never think of, at least at this point.

    I need very much to work on the creative aspect of my photography I believe.
     
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    Very interesting shot, it held my interest for quite a while. I like how you can see light between the pages, which of course makes the scene dynamic. I think I'd like to see the left side a bit darker, simply because it's the brightest area of the frame and it distracts the eye a bit from where the real action is.

    Just my two cents.
     
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  5. eric-holmes

    eric-holmes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I would hang it on my wall. Good job. I like the modern abstract feel I has to it.
     
  6. KmH

    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    I think a bit more light on the right would accomplish the same thing, better balance. :thumbup:
     
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    I like this one very much. Rather than more light on the right, I'd be tempted to crop just a bit off the left.
     
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    invisible Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Very true, but keep in mind that you've already lost some detail on the left (at least as viewed on my crappy netbook's screen).
     
  9. KmH

    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    So, just a little edit. the original first:

    The edit:

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    I still think that the left side is a bit too bright; however, the new edit is more balanced like you said it would be :thumbup:
     
  11. KmH

    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    There are some specular highlights on the left with no detail, but they are few and very small. Oh well.

    Thanks for taking a look.
     
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    Very nice.
    I think I prefer the original over the edit.
    I like the way the shadows trail off rather than drawing attention to the bottom right of the photo.
     

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