Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by KmH, Jul 30, 2010.
Wonderful, almost organic.
I like it. :thumbup:
This is the kind of stuff that I would probably never think of, at least at this point.
I need very much to work on the creative aspect of my photography I believe.
Very interesting shot, it held my interest for quite a while. I like how you can see light between the pages, which of course makes the scene dynamic. I think I'd like to see the left side a bit darker, simply because it's the brightest area of the frame and it distracts the eye a bit from where the real action is.
Just my two cents.
I would hang it on my wall. Good job. I like the modern abstract feel I has to it.
I think a bit more light on the right would accomplish the same thing, better balance. :thumbup:
I like this one very much. Rather than more light on the right, I'd be tempted to crop just a bit off the left.
Very true, but keep in mind that you've already lost some detail on the left (at least as viewed on my crappy netbook's screen).
So, just a little edit. the original first:
I still think that the left side is a bit too bright; however, the new edit is more balanced like you said it would be :thumbup:
There are some specular highlights on the left with no detail, but they are few and very small. Oh well.
Thanks for taking a look.
I think I prefer the original over the edit.
I like the way the shadows trail off rather than drawing attention to the bottom right of the photo.
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