Two for C&C

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  1. baddfishh40

    baddfishh40 TPF Noob!

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    Hey guys, I've been reading this forum for a while and I would like some feedback on these two images. Thanks in advance.

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  2. gsgary

    gsgary Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Great focus on the first ,the second would look better without the lads in the shot, i like the movement in the train
     
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    baddfishh40 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the quick reply. I completely agree with your comment on the second shot. In fact, the main reason I posted that one is because I plan on going back with a tripod and reshooting without anyone in the frame. I just was wondering what else I might be able to do that I haven't noticed.
     
  4. Sirashley

    Sirashley TPF Noob!

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    Hope you don't mind, but one of my favorite things to do is edit photos. Your thing says Okay to edit photos so I'm throwin down an edit. I sharpened it up and brought kitty in closer...

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    I'm on a really crappy monitor so its tough to tell if I oversharpened it, but I also blurred the background to give it more of a depth of field....
     
  5. bigtwinky

    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    the composition on the first is off... centered subject, empty space.
    the contrast and colour is also off

    the second pic is blurry / out of focus
     
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    Move the orange cone :)

    Open your shutter a lil more for more blur
     
  7. RPetterson

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    wow what a difference it makes!
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Well, what have you noticed?
     
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    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I'd recommend picking up the book Understanding Exposure by Bryan Peterson. A great book, recommended by many here, for the beginner.
     

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