Two landscapes & two bird shots for C&C

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  1. SlimPaul

    SlimPaul TPF Noob!

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    Hey,

    I haven't posted photos here for a while. I'd like to share two landscape and two bird photos and would appreciate some feedback on how to improve them.

    Thanks, Paul

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  2. davidmtml

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    On the first photo, try to put the horizon at either the bottom or top third, instead of smack dab in the middle.

    On the last photo, a touch more DOF would be good. Everything about the bird is in focus except the tip of the beak, which I find distracting.

    Other than that, nice images!
     
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    Thanks David. Anyone else?
     
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    sharpening up the bird pics will give them a better looking quality but over all very good. i feel like i dont even belong in the beginner forum :(
     

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