Two more pics with Linh (Model inside)

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  1. Mr. Vapor

    Mr. Vapor TPF Noob!

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    Not sure, the first one looks a bit soft? (perhaps even OOF?)

    Enjoy, comments and thoughts always welcome.
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  2. tirediron

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    1 is a nice shot, well composed, and exposed. Seems sharp enough on my crappy work monitor, but 2 is excellent! I love the sense of power and mood from it. I would think about a reshoot with a different background though; this one doesn't really work with the subject.
     
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    I keep thinking you're posting pictures of my Linh. =)

    2nd picture, tell her to lower her chin, also raise her guarding hand, it should be high enough to cover her jaw/ear area. fist could be a bit more on a 45o angle =)

    Neat picture regardless. =)
     
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    First out of focus and the pose and background just dont suit. The second one, like it but think may work better in BW.
     
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    beautiful subject but her outfit doesnt match the scenery in the first picture
     
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    Au Contraire! It goes along with the perception I have of her in the first photo, her being lithe and agile looking.
     
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    first one is a bit oof but the second one is right on
     

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