two new ones, CC please

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Kofman13, Nov 20, 2009.

  1. Kofman13

    Kofman13 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 7, 2009
    Messages:
    658
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    New York, NY
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Just stepped out of school between classes, the sun has a really nice effect from behind the subject :).

    [​IMG]

    [​IMG]
     
  2. Cojaro

    Cojaro TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 17, 2009
    Messages:
    62
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Memphis, TN
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    The second one is nice, but too bright IMO. And the sun glare is a bit distracting.
     
  3. KKJUN

    KKJUN TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 15, 2009
    Messages:
    249
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Gundlsee, Austria
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    nice. I like the spiderwebs (or whatever that is), but i think you should eather turn the contrast or the brightness down.
     
  4. Inst!nct

    Inst!nct TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Sep 16, 2009
    Messages:
    702
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Troll, Wisconsin
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    yea, i dont think the picture is TOO good, but here are some things that would improve it, go back later in the day, right now the sun seems to be too harsh on the flower, and completely ruining the colors, also, try to do rule of thirds, in the middle is not always the most pleasing view, especially for flowers with more in the background. Might want to turn up your aperture, and get some less harsh light on the flower. gl
     
  5. Kofman13

    Kofman13 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 7, 2009
    Messages:
    658
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    New York, NY
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    yeah... actually these flowers are bland in color they are grey with a dad of purple but not much. my aperture is open as wide as possible. yeah im learning rules..
     
  6. Inst!nct

    Inst!nct TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Sep 16, 2009
    Messages:
    702
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Troll, Wisconsin
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    right, i mean i understand that these aren't the flowers from wizard of oz, but regardless, there's a decent amount of halo, and harsh light surround them.
     

Share This Page