two new pictures critique haven't shot in a few months

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thanks!
 
1. Cool lighting, but the photo shouts out EYEBROWS.

2. Cool perspective, but most of the dog is blown out.
 
Yes, very cool perspective for the first one

as for the second picture its too blown out ..you probably should try editing
 
Hmm I rather like the first, its dark, creative and moody - however a litle think stands out is that I think a tiny bit more space above his head would have helped - it looks a little like you cut it off and is a little distracting. Other than that a good moody shot!

In the second two things stand out to me which damage the shot - firstly is the already mentioned blown out fur, its destroyed any detail and given very blasted look to things, might have been an effet you were after, but I think if it is you have gone a little over the top.
The other part is more situational and I appreciat that often its not easy to control such things (esp with animals as subjects) but the red and white shed/stable is really standing out against the background - its distracting to the main element of the shot I feel,

Overall I like your creativity, a few little nitpicks, but you appear to have sound method and ideas
 

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