Two pics I took on Newport Beach

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Idaho21, May 14, 2009.

  1. Idaho21

    Idaho21 TPF Noob!

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    I took these pics a few days ago on the beach, right after it finished raining. I like them. I know that the first one is centrally composed, but oh well.:mrgreen:

    Pic one was a closeup, and pic two was taken as the sun started to shine brightly.

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  2. KmH

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    Compositionally #1 looks nicer than #2. The white flower just kind of gets lost in #2.

    Nice sharp focus on both. I prefer more contrast. With a bit more work I think #1 can be improved measurably. Cropping can change the somewhat centered framing of the white flower.

    Something like this:
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