Two shots from today

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  1. D40

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    Could you please let me know what you think and how I can makes them better:)

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    Both are very nice, but could use a tighter crop.
     
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    i'd leave the first shot alone, warm up the second and crop it a little tighter.
     
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    I really like #1 alot. The little girls outfit is super cute.
     
  5. D40

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    Thank you so much for the comments, I know I need to work on my cropping but I seem to have a hard time knowing how much to crop. Just something I need to work on:)
     
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    How's this:

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    By the way, these were taken with the Sigma 70-200 f/2.8. I find it to be a Great portrait lens as far as the focal length:)
     
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    Love shot #1 nice skin tone. #2 seems a little pale to me...
     
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    The tree in the background annoys me in #1. The photo may have been slightly more on topic to the subject if you took a step to the left and she too a step camera right. Lovely idea though.
     
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    Garbz: so basically get an angle without that tree in the background and keep the one on the left? Thanks for the comments!
     

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