Two Shots of Love

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  1. Photoboy

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    We shot this couple this morning for their engagement (we'll also shoot their wedding). They were just adorable and quite in love. What do you think of these two photos?

    Photo #1:
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    And Photo #2:
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    Great shots. Period.
     
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    Great shots. The only thing I could say is maybe try one (Like the second) with her not looking directly at the camera. Really like the BW. Good job.
     
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    The second one isn't vey flattering but I like the atmospheric first one.
     
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    I LOVE the first one!!! :):)

    The second ones is nice, but I would like it if he was looking up as well. Screw the flower smelling. I love the look on her face, now just have him have the same one and id be great :) IMO
     
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    Wow...that first one is amazing.
     
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    Absolutely love the first one and agree w/others, he needs to be looking up on the 2nd shot and her arm/flowers need to be lower, my eyes go to the flowers instead of the lovely couple. JMO :)
     
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    Beautifull shots!
    The 1rst one really stands out for me!

    good job
     
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    The first one rocks, to put it simply. I cant help but feel on the second one shes shoving those flowers up his nose.
     
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    That first one gives me chills! Awesome work!
     
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    That first shot is awesome!!! nice work... Second is good too...looks soft though...but I guess that was part of your intent...
     
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    The first one is superb, what on earth are they standing on? I assume it's rocks and sand but they look so smooth, almost lunar... very odd and very cool.
     

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