Two smiles

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  1. cjm

    cjm TPF Noob!

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    Two smiles

    One of my Niece and the other of my brother in law Peter. Converted to monocrhome. Any comments?

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    It looks a little flat, not too much, but I would like to see the contrast upped a tad. It's a nice composition, but it would have been great if your brother in law had been looking at the camera.
    Not a bad picture all in all though.
     
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    Can you crop in a bit on the left, and give it more space on the right?
    Then burn down the background a little more.
    A tad more contrast would also be cool.
    Your move.
     
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    Such a sweet looking kid. I hope you did some portraits with her. If so please post some of them. Thanks for sharing.
     

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