Un-edited (been playing this 1 for month but cant get what I want)

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  1. Sharfy

    Sharfy TPF Noob!

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    Anyone wants to play with this

    She is my friend (the background is shameful because we are in the main room of a suite of the hotel) LOL

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    just a month ago I have been crazy with this things SLR, editing, lenses.... and I don't know why I am loving it.... before I was just playing my SLR's like a toy in family events and parties but now I want to learn more of the process of getting serious. I bought books and will be enrolling soon




    another un-edited

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  2. DanFinePhotography

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    I like #1 looks like the only thing is it might be a little off on the white balance. The image looks a little warm to me. You might open up the aperture a tad to get some of the background out of focus, you may be able to blur the background a bit in PP'ing
     
  3. Sharfy

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    Thanks I will try that also :D
     
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    I took the first photo and opened it in Photoshop. It was pretty severely underexposed,and the white balance is also off. I do not think I can color-correct that shot. I did a B&W conversion, cloned out the light switch and whatever was on the wall in the upper left hand corner, rotated the image clockwise by 3.6 degrees, and cropped a bit off, then did a monochrome conversion.

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  5. Sharfy

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    Thanks Derrel ;) you do it far better with all the play I do before hahahaha
     
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    let the photoshop fool give it a shot ;)
     
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    my edit
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    here is my go at it.
     
  9. Negative ISO

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    Do you have enough different opinions to confuse you yet? Here is my take on #1:

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  10. Sharfy

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    I really do like what you did! getting the ideas now :D
     
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    I don't have any grand ideas about #2, but maybe something like this:
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    here is my go at the other picture
     

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