unfinished song

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  1. vonnagy

    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    Ok, i recently converted this to mp3 format. A few words of warning:

    1. Its an unfinished song that I recorded as a shoddy demo about 5 years ago
    2. The sound quality is crap
    3. its a 3.5 mb download
    4. I play all the instruments (poorly)
    5. Don't waste your time downloading it if you are expecting something listenable

    If you made your way thru that disclaimer - you made downloard this crap here
     
  2. Meysha

    Meysha still being picky Vicky

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    Now This is my area of interest! Stuff photography, give me making music anyday.

    Awwrghghgrwww (that's my homer noise again)
    I think it's great! Love it! And it's not that far from being finished I's say either.
    There's a couple of little things that bugs me.
    First of all, when the drums come in they feel a little hesitant.
    Secondly, when the second guitar kicks in, it sounds a little too loud, and also a bit tinny.
    And lastly, have you thought about putting some cello in as a bass? I dunno where you wanna go with the song, but while it was playing, i kept imagining a soft sort of droning cello providing the bass.

    I love it so far and can't wait to hear the finished product. I'll have to put some of my boyfriend's stuff up here. He's a bit shy to do it himself. hehe.
     
  3. Rob

    Rob TPF Noob!

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    Love it - really good stuff. Let me know when you've got an album out!

    Rob
     
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    JonMikal TPF Noob!

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    ditto! i'll be first in line. :thumbup:
     
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    inneist TPF Noob!

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    Touched.

    "Royksopp" from New Zealand. :)
     

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