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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by sampunto, Jan 13, 2008.

  1. sampunto

    sampunto TPF Noob!

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    Hey guys

    Currently doing a photographic module at University and have to hand in some images on Friday so was just wondering what you thought of them and any improvements needed, (with photoshop or with my actual technique)


    Please keep in mind I am a novice at photography and first 3 images were taken with awful £100 camera.

    Thanks in advance. Sam

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  2. molsen

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    #1 is my fav. cool place to shoot!
     
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    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

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    IMO, these would benefit from some more post-processing to increase the impact.

    Both were rotated slightly, new layer set to multiply and opacity reduced to taste.

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    Hate to disagree with a wise old nun, but they need contrast - just look at what is on the ceiling
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    I just used 7 pixels of Local Contrast (you can download it from my web site)
    If you want more atmosphere - try the MistyBlur on top of the contrast
    Good luck
     
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    bhop No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I actually like the first three best. Personally, i'm fine with the contrast as-is.
     
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    I agree!
    Nice shots.
     
  7. sampunto

    sampunto TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the comments guys...

    I did try to sharpen then but they really didn't come out to well.

    Im also doing a blog as its part of the degree so take a look. (a lot of it is lie's though to keep to the criteria of the course.

    http://sampjandrews.blogspot.com/
    please take a look and comment
     

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