Unplanned car shoot! CC welcome :)

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  1. Prostackz

    Prostackz TPF Noob!

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    Out driving and saw an old ice storage building that's a million years old and couldn't help myself, hope you guys like em.

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  2. Geaux

    Geaux No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like the way you got down to headlight level on the first two and I think the third one would have taken on a totally different personality if the same level was done as the first two.
     
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    Nice car :thumbup:
     
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    Thats good C&C:er:


    Nice car, but I am not a fan of these shots. I think I understand what you were going for with the color in the first one, but its too bland.

    While the angle is good on the second one. I do not like the crop and lighting. Its hard with cars, but I do not like how the lower corner is very dark. It also bothers me that the hood scoop is cut off and the roof is cut off.

    The third one, I would like to see the sky and tree more intense.
     
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    I love how aggressive the car looks at eye level, so naturally a ton of my shots are from that height, but the last one I felt like I had to do the entire car justice :)
    Thanks Houghwya!
    I can definitely see where your comin from. The first shot I love the look of the building, but I do need to go back and brighten that blue up a little on the car, and the second I was really really focusing on the headlight and Subaru emblem, and I would like to see some more of that concrete at the bottom left like you said as well. Gonna go back tonight and see if I can fix em up a little.
     
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    You used the background very well in #1.
     
  7. Prostackz

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    Worked over the first one a bit.

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