Untitled #7

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  1. Battou

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    Taken with Canon FD 50mm 1.4 on Canon EF, ASA 1000
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    the composition is not bad, but it needs some more contrast. almost the entire image is composed of a middle gray with only a few highlights and shadows. the bricks on the right hand bottom corner are distracting.

    maybe a crop where you focus on the middle right of the frame would make it more interesting.
     
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    I was trying not to crop too much, and destroy the original composition, but I'll take another crop and see how it looks before too long.
     
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    I'm not fond of what it is looking like with a new crop at all.
     

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