Untitled #7

[Battou]

Taken with Canon FD 50mm 1.4 on Canon EF, ASA 1000

Bigger Here

Wildwood Avenue
Salamanca New York.

 

[Battou]

Link to larger file in place

 

[jvgig]

the composition is not bad, but it needs some more contrast. almost the entire image is composed of a middle gray with only a few highlights and shadows. the bricks on the right hand bottom corner are distracting.

maybe a crop where you focus on the middle right of the frame would make it more interesting.

 

[Battou]

I was trying not to crop too much, and destroy the original composition, but I'll take another crop and see how it looks before too long.

 

[Battou]

I'm not fond of what it is looking like with a new crop at all.