Discussion in 'General Critical Analysis' started by GacAttack, Sep 2, 2007.
C&C, please. Thanks!
image is too symmetrical, and i think it's leaning to the left. exposure seems to be spot on and the detail of the church is nice, but there isn't much to lead your eyes anywhere, again feels mostly like a snapshot.
i think i would have included more stairs on the front (if there wasn't a lot of other distracting stuff at that level) and off set the angle of the building to the left or right in order to try and lead the eyes more around the image.
Thanks again for our input. Your are correct in guessing that there are some less than desirable things lower on the stairs. I took a really close look at the alignment, and the Cathedral is actually leaning slightly right at the bottom, but slightly left at the top. I also (finally) noticed the barrel distortion of which you wrote in another post. With a tight grid overlaid, it's definitely a bit puffy.
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