Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Rhubarb, Jan 15, 2005.
Would love to hear your thoughts and critique.
I like the main photo, but don't care much for the little colored bits. Maybe it's because I can't tell it they are meant to be leaves or lips or what?
Thanks for your comment. Currently the spots are just colourful spots! In the original (below) it is actually a bit of gum. I added them because it kind of worked with the small miracle thing.
I also had the idea of replacing the 'spots' with leaves as thats what they reminded me of. I have included that pic too.
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