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  1. vwkid45

    vwkid45 TPF Noob!

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    This is my first portrait photo shoot! Let me know what you think!

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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    nice surrounding but.. I'd like to see her eyes - both. in every shot her eyes are lost.
     
  3. Alex_B

    Alex_B No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    ... those are the strange modern times where girls hide their head under a hood but expose almost all of their legs ;) ... just kidding :)

    I agree on the issue of the eyes. Not needed on every shot, but 1 and for suffer in particular. in 2 and five she seems to focus (or defocus in 5 ;)) on a distant point of interest which is nice.
     
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    vwkid45 TPF Noob!

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    thanks! i'll try to expose her eyes more next time.
     
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    inneist TPF Noob!

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    Will she be on "O.C."? ;)

    My fav is the very last one. The background wall and she look like a wonderful fit!
     
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    the place you took this at is great and so are the angles

    last one is my favorite
     
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    vwkid45 TPF Noob!

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    haha i wish she was going to be on the OC. THanks, I like to try new things with the different angles.
     
  8. karissa

    karissa The Untitled

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    Nice! Love the creative angles. One thing that did bother me some was the coloring. They look a little to saturated and sharpened. It could just be me.
     
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    I really like the angle of the last picture. Yet these seem more like artistic shots than portraits in my opinion. A little too much emphasis on the surroundings rather than your actual subject.
     
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    oldnavy170 TPF Noob!

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    I like #4. Its a real natural stance but it still has that something "special" to it. Great job on that!!!
     

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