Urban Bridge

[vwkid45]

This is my first portrait photo shoot! Let me know what you think!

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[mentos_007]

nice surrounding but.. I'd like to see her eyes - both. in every shot her eyes are lost.

 

[Alex_B]

... those are the strange modern times where girls hide their head under a hood but expose almost all of their legs ... just kidding

I agree on the issue of the eyes. Not needed on every shot, but 1 and for suffer in particular. in 2 and five she seems to focus (or defocus in 5 ) on a distant point of interest which is nice.

 

[vwkid45]

thanks! i'll try to expose her eyes more next time.

 

[inneist]

Will she be on "O.C."?

My fav is the very last one. The background wall and she look like a wonderful fit!

 

[DeepSpring]

the place you took this at is great and so are the angles

last one is my favorite

 

[vwkid45]

haha i wish she was going to be on the OC. THanks, I like to try new things with the different angles.

 

[karissa]

Nice! Love the creative angles. One thing that did bother me some was the coloring. They look a little to saturated and sharpened. It could just be me.

 

[kacelle]

I really like the angle of the last picture. Yet these seem more like artistic shots than portraits in my opinion. A little too much emphasis on the surroundings rather than your actual subject.

 

[oldnavy170]

I like #4. Its a real natural stance but it still has that something "special" to it. Great job on that!!!