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[nabero]

I'd really appreciate constructive comments and critique on this image. I was going to post it in the Critique section, but I don't have one specific question--I'd like critique on any aspects that strike you.

Crops? Color? Boring? What do you think?

Thanks.

 

[abraxas]

Looks too cold to sit there.

 

[lostprophet]

well other than the fact that those chairs bring back nightmares from school, I like it but... I'd prefer the fallen over chair to be on its side so it is easier to recognise what it is

 

[New Hampshire]

Ha, I guess I took literal meaning in what abraxs said since it looked a bit "cold" to me too (not sure if thats what he meant though) So here is what I came up with:

I ran it through the Warming Filter (LBA) bumped up to 40%. Just a subtle warmth to it now.

Brian

 

[EBphotography]

Either that or gone completely. I like the image though.

 

[nabero]

but... I'd prefer the fallen over chair to be on its side so it is easier to recognise what it is

Yeh, I'd like that better too....but I didn't have a shovel

Oh and...I was trying to achieve something creepy and cold...I do like the edit you came up with New Hampshire. It's richer, but still a little chilled. Thanks.

 

[lostprophet]

Yeh, I'd like that better too....but I didn't have a shovel

Oh and...I was trying to achieve something creepy and cold...I do like the edit you came up with New Hampshire. It's richer, but still a little chilled. Thanks.

good excuse

 

[loser101]

Yeah i cant say it does anything for me, sorry. Might have been slightly better if it was horizontal.

 

[New Hampshire]

I will say something about your origional over my edit, Nabero, is that in yours the grass has a better green "pop" to it. Either edit, I do like it a lot.

Brian

 

[abraxas]

Yeah i cant say it does anything for me, sorry. Might have been slightly better if it was horizontal.

This photo speaks to me. It says;

Hey Jim, it's too cold to sit here.

Gary, did you notice Allen fell over?

Yeah, but I don't like Allen.

You think he's dead?

Hope so.

Let's go look.

How do you tell?

Kick him.

Harder.

Yep, he's dead.

I never did like him anyhow.

Me either.

Kick him again.

Harder.

Think we should tell anyone?

Nah.

Let's go.

Yeah, it's too cold to sit here.

Looks good though.

'Cept the dead Allen.

Hey guys?

Yeah?

I'm not dead.

We knew that. But we wanted to kick you anyhow.

Hey Allen!

Yeah?

Your Mom home?

No.

Let's go to your house.

 

[loser101]

hmmmm okay

 

[nabero]

well i wanted it to tell a story...


a story is a story is a story.....right?

 

[abraxas]

a story is a story is a story.....right?

:thumbup:

 

[cherrymoose]

Interesting capture. I like it. :thumbup:

This photo speaks to me. It says;

Hey Jim, it's too cold to sit here.

Gary, did you notice Allen fell over?

Yeah, but I don't like Allen.

You think he's dead?

Hope so.

Let's go look.

How do you tell?

Kick him.

Harder.

Yep, he's dead.

I never did like him anyhow.

Me either.

Kick him again.

Harder.

Think we should tell anyone?

Nah.

Let's go.

Yeah, it's too cold to sit here.

Looks good though.

'Cept the dead Allen.

Hey guys?

Yeah?

I'm not dead.

We knew that. But we wanted to kick you anyhow.

Hey Allen!

Yeah?

Your Mom home?

No.

Let's go to your house.

:lmao:

 

[shorty6049]

excellent! i like the second one more i think because you can see more detail and i like that, but i like both.