Verdiction needed !

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  1. krokotam

    krokotam TPF Noob!

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    Hello guys ,
    i`m newbie in this forum and i need youf opinion about some photos :
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    I`m sorry if they are too big , but i don`t know how to resize them here :blushing:

    Waiting for pro`s to take me down ;)
     
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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I'm not entirely sure what "Verdiction" is, but I'll assume you want comment/critique. First of all, with respect to resizing the images, try Irfanview (Available as freeware: http://www.irfanview.com) Very useful for resizing, and converting, as well as vieing just about any image format you can imagine.

    1. Not a bad image at all; a little over-bright as a result of the flash, but it's sharp and well detailed.

    2. Wont' display.

    3. I'm afraid that I don't 'get' this image at all. Technically the exposure is fine, but the focus is way off. Artistically, I get nothing from it. What was your intent with this?

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.

    ~John
     
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    krokotam TPF Noob!

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    Can you please specify, for which one you are talking , because they are 2 :) ?

    thank you
     
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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    This is why we ask people to number their images when posting.

    1. Frog
    2. Unknown - won't display
    3. Campfire.
     
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    krokotam TPF Noob!

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    Some more :

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    Waiting for opinion again :)
     
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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    3. Slightly over-exposed, would suggest a slight saturation boost and cropping close in on the bloom and the bee.

    4. Nicely captured, however the I think it would have been better from a position higher up, the dark shrubs in the foreground don't add much.

    5. This one too escapes me. What is your subject? The sign? The Buildings? Overyall, it's a nicely executed conversion, but a bit over-exposed and somewhat mid-tone rich.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.

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    Duuude! Did you just toss those pretty tasty looking shishkabobs directly on the hot coals? /emote [bonk]

    hehe, just missing with you. Forgive me, I'm just hungry.

    On your photos, perhaps some light vignetting would help focus on the subject.
     
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    I like 1 and 5 the most.

    On 1 you might want to try cropping it leaving the frog down in the lower left hand corner looking right. And tone down the brightness...see image below...hope you don't mind.
     

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    krokotam TPF Noob!

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    lockwood81 - good job at editing - i`m not good at photoshoping ;)


    5 - in this one i have tryed to snap different look of one modern city , and yes the sign there is not good at ...
    as for 4 i have tryed to photo it from several locations but there was trees behind me everywhere :)

    maulrat - it`s optical illision they are not directly on the coals ;) just look at the one in left and you will see :))
     

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