Vicki

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  1. Arhy

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    Some shots from my last photosession with a wonderful girl, who's name is Vicki.
    But still I have some technical mistakes: missed with a focus, made cup look a bit dirty and so on. What to say.. I am learning.. :)

    Canon 400D+50mm 1.8

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    Please, feel free to leave your critique and comments.

    Arhy.
     
  2. invisibledemon

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    very pretty girl.
    i like number 2.
    wouldnt have cropped so tight on the face though. wouldve been better to at least get all of the skin, but thats just my opinion.
     
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    Wow she is stunning. Usually I dont like stuff that bright but it's really well done.
     
  4. Arhy

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    invisibledemon, yep, I can agree with you. But unfortunately I haven't saved an original photo, so I can't just fix it.
    Thanks.

    Riggaberto, merci.
     
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    She is very pretty. I like the first picture, her eyes could have been more in focus though.
     
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    I favour the second one over the first. Perhaps I find the first one too bright. Not that the first one is a bad photograph though.

    David
     
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    I guess it's just me; the hair elastic on her wrist in the first one is ALL I notice unfortunately. Having her eyes in focus would have definitely improved the shot. Number two is nice; as said previously.. But just get those eyes a little more sharp!
     
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    Firstly, shooting portraits can be difficult, especially if you dont know the person well, it's hard to put them at ease. Secondly, she is a very pretty girl, but in the first one, I have no idea what the white this is above her head and its totally blown out, the second shot is nice, I think I know what you were aiming for, I would have zoomed out a bit more, and made sure there was some nice steam coming off the piping hot coffee.... Good all the same....
     
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    Renair, the first one I actually like because of bright light. It seems like a studio but it's not. (It's museum)
    And skin color I think is excellent here.

    About zooming out the second shot I can agree with you. But what's done is done :)
    I will be more careful with that next time.
    Thanks.
     

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