(Vine?) Glass Composition

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  1. shutterfingers

    shutterfingers TPF Noob!

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    This is a composition with a creeper and a wine glass. Please let me know what you think of it.

    Thanks.

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    not bad, but seems a bit dark to me. good DOF. All in all, good picture :)
     
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    i like it
     
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    I think you've got a good idea there - the elements, colour and light are great. My temptation would be to move the vine to the left of the glass, keep the vertical lines, and make the frame less elongated.

    Regards, Tony
     
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    It is kind of an oddly shaped crop, and I think the table might be slanted ever so slightly to the left. It might just be because of perspective. The lighting is good though, and so is the general composition.
     

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