Violins - First shoot

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  1. 35mm Bob

    35mm Bob TPF Noob!

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    I am Artemis' Dad, and I taught him all he knows!

    Nah...not really
    But here yah go anyway :)

    My first picture to you guys.


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  2. LittleMan

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    awesome!
    I love taking pictures of my violins.

    If you want some ideas of good compositions you can see my thread
    Violins

    Your first picture is really good! If you would like some critique I would be glad to help! :)
     
  3. Artemis

    Artemis Just Punked Himself

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    Wow Dad, thats a really good shot, well thought out...I really admire this shot, Great work daddio!

    Come on guys, give im some feed back the poor old senial fool.....hehe just kidding :)
     
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    LittleMan TPF Noob!

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    Here is my first violin thread... the first time I attempted photos of that violin.
    First Violin

    Of course now I have a new chin rest and I changed the finish from gloss to satin.

    Just thought these links might come in hindy. :)
     
  5. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    yay! I remember your first post! It was a looooong time ago :) so welcome back Arti's dad :D
     
  6. Artemis

    Artemis Just Punked Himself

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    Thanks for posting little man :D Great pics of your Violin, im sure these will really inspire my Dad.

    Thanks Mentos for replying :)
     
  7. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Welcome :)

    Not too bad of a shot, here are my thoughts...

    The bottom of the tail piece is just out of the frame, since it's in sharper focus than the bridge, I'd like to see more/all of it.

    Actually, I'd like to see the bridge in sharp focus. Either with a similar short DOF (putting the tail out of focus) or with a wider DOF so that they would both be sharp. Maybe showing more of the body/strings as they travel out of focus and out of the frame.
     
  8. Artemis

    Artemis Just Punked Himself

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    Thanks, my Dads had a look at this post and hes gonna maybe re try it :)
     

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