Wait For Me C&C

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  1. indeedies

    indeedies TPF Noob!

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    ISO 200
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    Now that I look at the uploaded pic I notice that it's darker than what I have on my calibrated monitor. There's more detail in his hair and pants than I'm seeing that is posted here. What do you guys think?
     
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    I think I like it.
    Good composition.
     
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    I think it's a good shot. I can't decide if I want to see more of the left side of the bridge or not... Good work!
     
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    I really like it. I am the same about the left side of the bridge. Cant decide if a little more would make it better.
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Very nice. I like how dark it is myself. I tend to like contrasty.
    I am debating whether I want to remove a smidge off the bottom. *shrugs*
     
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    A little more would have helped. It happened so fast I wasn't able to center up on the bridge. It's one of those things where as I was taking it I was thinking I need to be centered :lol:
     
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    I've cropped this a ton and add bridge, take away, add again...
    When I add more I like that it makes him look even more like a child but then it almost seems too small. If that makes sense.
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Totally make's sense.
     
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    Here's the original if anyone wants to take a different approach to it. I have it in color but liked the B&W better.

    As you can see I left enough of the bridge to work with later in PP and do what Bitter suggested.

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    where did my comment go? :???: anyway i like the original. maybe crop some off the right...
     
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    I'd like to see what er111a does with this. ;)

    I'll take a stab.
    I like the color image too.
     

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