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  1. Roger

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    I like the lines and textures in this shot. Of course, I also like bikes shots, too! I wonder if you could make the bike stand out a bit more since you have made it a focal point through the title? Nice work!
     
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    Fantastic lead in/out lines and great texture detail on these.

    Nice one!

    David
     
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    Wow
     
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    souljourney glad you like it...I am curious which part of the bike doesn't stand out to you. I agree being such a high contrast image some details are obscured.....David thanks very much....a5i736 :mrgreen:.
     
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    Amazing texture on the lead-in wall. It's a great image, but I would agree with souljourney. For me some parts of the bike seat and the handle bars are lost in the detail of the wall, but really that's a trivial issue IMO, so again well taken!
     
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    I love it!! And I love bikes so it is the perfect combination.
     
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    I think that, overall, the tonal quality is wonderful throughout the picture. It's just that one spot in the foreground, where the bike is leaning, it is a bit too contrasty *compared to* the rest of the image. There are some hot spots on the bricks behind the bike. I think this moves the focal point (for me) to the top right of the image because it's easier on my eyes.

    Don't get me wrong...this is a GREAT shot...just giving my humble .02, that's all!
     
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    thebeatpoet thanks glad you like it....Coldow91 thanks a lot...souljourney I wasn't offended by your comment, I appreciate your opinion.
     
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    +1 what he said.
     

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