Walk around a private school

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  1. verticalization

    verticalization TPF Noob!

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    Got up early the other day and took a walk around these trails behind a Christian private college, here are some of my favorites :)
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  2. Future

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    1) Maybe go higher aperture to get a better DoF. Good concept. Just play with the shot more.

    3) The whole top section is destracting and takes from the photo. Crop it out.

    4) I don't know what your trying to portray here. Bland.

    5) Good concept just as appealing as it could be.


    Nothing really jumps out as eye catching to me. But keep playing and try to find views people don't use everyday. Like looking up at Christ on the Cross or put the camera right above the ground on the hash marks and create rythm from that angle.
     
  3. JohnMF

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    I though #4 was the best one
     
  4. tjones8611

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    #3 keeps the eye moving, totally awesome. agree though, should have been cropped
     

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