Walk in the Park

Discussion in 'Landscape & Cityscape' started by 1986, Jan 16, 2007.

  1. 1986

    1986 TPF Noob!

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    I took these a while ago durring a walk, tell me what you think

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  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The first I like.
    Nice play with very shallow DOF.
    It would have helped composition if you had somehow had this twig run through your frame diagonally. Now it is very centred.

    The second is too close. The cone should have been complete. A vertical frame seems like the solution. Alas, you chose horizontal...
     
  3. Scooter

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    Nice job. I agree with LaFoto.
     

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