Walking among the Flags

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by azkul, Apr 26, 2005.

  1. azkul

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    well I think it is really nice and deep. But if you could get rid of the "legs" on the left (those where jeans are visible only) id would be better :)
     
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    Thanks for your suggestion.
     
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    agreed. it seems snapshotty, or at least less powerful than it could be because of the building in the top right of the photo and the legs on the left. those shots are hard though, i'd be lucky just to get it!
     
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    Thanks for the suggestions. I agree that the building should get erased. I'll work on that and see what I can come up with.
     
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    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    hmmm... I really don't mind the building OR the 2nd child. It's all real life... part of the moment. I do wish the lighting was a bit more directional, but oh well.

    My opinion is that there are already PLENTY of lines in the composition itself. I would like to see this with with a plain, black frame. I suspect it will help draw the viewer into the photo.

    Interesting photo.

    -Pete
     

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