Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Jdog, Jul 24, 2003.
is a bad scan but what do you guys think?
I like it...especially the black and white....just wish I could see what's out to the left.
bit too much contrast for my liking. but other than that, four thumbs up!
sorry about the contrast its the scan, Camera: Yashica mat 124 w/ Tmax
I like the contrast in this pic, It adds to the mystery, I also like the semi-nude but still not a whole lot to see.
i'm actually digging this. the contrast, imo, adds immensely to the impact. nude human figure veiled by a nice gray tone, contrasted with the emergence of a silhouette with a hint of human texture. the form is reaching for something and i am thankful that i don't know exactly what it is, though deduction would lead me there. comparing the zone contrasts from extreme left to extreme right - they work wonderfully. the blown out highlights around the faucet also keep me from focusing on them and indicate to me a 'finished emergence'. nice shot. the only thing that makes me uneasy in all the vertical strength of line is that your horizontal isn't level. i think a tilt to even your horizontal will strengthen it and also assist in silencing the converging verticals.
edit - a tilt to even the horizon of the diamond patterned tile.
i got one word "perky"
i think its a cool shot , very mysterious ... it builds a height of anticipation ...
I really like it. Concur with the previous posts on little contrasty. But I wouldnt try to improve it. Shots like this dont come often. One question. Candid or deliberate. It looks very "photojournalisticy"
Love it !!
Awesome work JDog. I always love seeing your work.
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