Watch your balls.....

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by bogleric, Nov 21, 2003.

  1. bogleric

    bogleric TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Oct 23, 2003
    Messages:
    928
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Michigan, USA
    I found this from a while back and would like some feedback on it. I know there are lot of improvements that could be made to it.....


    [​IMG]
     
  2. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

    Joined:
    Sep 2, 2003
    Messages:
    25,113
    Likes Received:
    2,023
    Location:
    In the mental ward of this forum
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Start by cropping out those bottom heads, and the person on the left. They're distracting. Pull the action more into the image and you'll have a nice shot here. I like it!
     
  3. Dew

    Dew TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 27, 2003
    Messages:
    1,688
    Likes Received:
    0
    im trying to find the subject and i cant find one ... there is a lot going on, perhaps zoomed in on a particular somthing and let the rest stand in the background ...

    otherwise, i like the colors :D
     
  4. Sharkbait

    Sharkbait TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 4, 2003
    Messages:
    2,405
    Likes Received:
    18
    Location:
    Indianapolis, IN
    Agreed; there's too deep a DOF. It allows too much of the frame to be in focus, and the eye never has a chance to stop roaming around the image.

    Good action shot though...must have been a wicked-high shutter speed to catch a baseball in flight.
     
  5. Jeff Canes

    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

    Joined:
    May 19, 2003
    Messages:
    6,189
    Likes Received:
    22
    Location:
    Hollywood, FLA USA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Crop or zoom in closer – the person’s face in the top left and the man in green jacket need to go, it’s to cruder on that side

    When every shot at the batter’s back IMO you should shot during the fallow thru of the swing so you get part of his face, but this approach uses a lot of film, or move to the other side of the plate for a still.

    Do you intent to shot baseball or other sports regularly. It soon I would recommend getting a good zoom about 200-300mm, try Ebay first
     

Share This Page