Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by PNA, Jul 16, 2008.
I really like the idea of the shot...but I think that it would be helped with a different composition (perhaps including what they were looking at) cause the angle just feel weird to me..........but I do think that you have the potential for a great shot here
Thanks for the review......the shot was take back in the early 70's when I had no idea what I was doing......and now, obvously, it can not be re-shot.
I think this is rather cool.
I think if it were mine, I would probaly crop to remove the second bit of window, as I find it a wee bit of a distraction.
Thanks....I noticed that window and forgot to remove it before posting.
There's an interesting, haphazard look to this shot, in it's disjunct framing, lack of contrast, and the way the subject is captured at a fairly random moment. If it was mine, I would bump up the graininess to bring that out even more.
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