Water deal.

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  1. craig

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    Shot this near lovely Shoshoni, WY last Sunday. ƒ7.1 @ 1/60. Focal length = 22mm. ISO 100 cloudy + 2 white balance. Basically I am in love with this shot and looking for some other thoughts.

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    The colors are flat, and the sky doesn't help at all.

    There should be more space on the right, something like this (I did a lazy job of cloning):

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    I think you messed up my shot. I do not like the yellow cast and adding image to the frame is just wrong. Thanks for the input though.

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    I agree Craig. Although trendy, it doesn't really fit the image.
     
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    Actually I am very proud of this crop because it was done in camera. It is my goal to never crop in post processing. In all honesty that rarely happens.

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    Yeah I'm not sure about the yellow-cast, but it looks so attractive and tempting for me these days. But the subject is in the dead center.

    Edit: Btw I checked your portfolio elsaspet, they're fantastic! How did you manage the bloom effect? Did you use diffusion filter?
     
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    Hi,
    I don't want to take the thread off topic, so I'll send you a message PM, ok?
    Hugs and thanks!
     

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