Water Tower at dawn

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  1. raul_the_truck

    raul_the_truck TPF Noob!

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    I think it'd be better if it were a bit brighter. I don't like how everything's cut off at the bottom either, or how the top thing on the tower is cut off.
     
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    I like the photo, but I think it's a bit blurred and could use some more brightness or maybe saturation.
     
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    - Used the "dodge" brush to dodge the highlights (x2 passes)
    - Ran a digital noise removal filter
    - Ran unsharp mask at .9 / 100% / 4
     
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    raul_the_truck TPF Noob!

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    thanks for the comments. i am totally cool with you leaving it up....good job, it looks a lot better.
     
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    I love the colours. I just don't dig on the industrial nature of the shot. Trying to put that aside, it's nice work.
     

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