Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Peach Comma, Jan 13, 2005.
i like the left 1/3 of the pic with the bricks and paint peeling. the rest of it looks a bit busy to me.
That's one of the things I like the most about it, the contrast between the simplicity of the left and the right side with more going on.
Very nice texture, color and very crisp. I like the photo!
I've looked at this a few times and I really like it. I love the composition and the activity on the right side doesn't bother me. I love the tone and even the border. Great work!
I'm with Marsha. I would crop the left Vrt. at the left egdge and on the frame to the window. The right is a little to busy and I dont care for the glare on the window.
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